I absolutely love your idea, and also feel like during your speak you should give more examples or try to grab your viewers in. Start by engaging with them and basically let them know that this will apply to them. i tend to realize that when you are give people the understanding that theses needs or this solution will help them or change them in some way they are more willing to listen and engage with your project ! overall great job !
Nice job recording your pitch. To get even sharper on the value of your idea, I would consider connecting with your audience with an engaging question in the beginning to identify and relate to the demand you think exists. I feel like you could also increase your connection with your audience with direct eye contact. I felt that you were distracted a bit during the recording and did not reach the potential of connectivity. Adjusting these two things could greatly improve your connection with your audience. Thanks for sharing!
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ReplyDeleteI absolutely love your idea, and also feel like during your speak you should give more examples or try to grab your viewers in. Start by engaging with them and basically let them know that this will apply to them. i tend to realize that when you are give people the understanding that theses needs or this solution will help them or change them in some way they are more willing to listen and engage with your project ! overall great job !
Hello,
ReplyDeleteNice job recording your pitch. To get even sharper on the value of your idea, I would consider connecting with your audience with an engaging question in the beginning to identify and relate to the demand you think exists. I feel like you could also increase your connection with your audience with direct eye contact. I felt that you were distracted a bit during the recording and did not reach the potential of connectivity. Adjusting these two things could greatly improve your connection with your audience. Thanks for sharing!